Critique of my report,
by my Print Making class professor Aragon
Great description of the pieces; your narrative of the essay
has a natural flow but there are times when it felt a bit dry. Mainly because
there were some sentences that need to be connected rather that have them on
their own. When you create short sentences you define a style that mimics a more
factual element of the piece; in your case, while you are using facts, I think
it would’ve helped the tone of voice of the paper to be less formal so that the
reader can “immerse” into the description of the events or the artworks. It
seems to me you really enjoyed the Print Fair and had quite the time discovering
new artists and their work. I hope this has translated into your own ideas for
future pieces and makes you push yourself into creating more complicated
imagery.
Keep up the good work
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